I think the 6 is too close to the E right now. I would actually like to see a bit of space between take and 6 so that they read distinctly since there is otherwise no separation of color or weight. Otherwise, a very nice mark.
In addition to what's been said, the crown above the 'a' is way too small. It will be lost at smaller print sizes. Perhaps scale it up just a bit. Nice type treatment though.
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I think the 6 is too close to the E right now. I would actually like to see a bit of space between take and 6 so that they read distinctly since there is otherwise no separation of color or weight. Otherwise, a very nice mark.
ReplyThanks, I've got a few little variations coming, and I'm going to add a little separation between the e and 6.**Thanks for the comment.
ReplyIn addition to what's been said, the crown above the 'a' is way too small. It will be lost at smaller print sizes. Perhaps scale it up just a bit. Nice type treatment though.
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