La vendimia
by v-trooper • Uploaded: Mar. 26 '09
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it´s a sketch of a wine cup with a little bit of wine and a cheese without a piece
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You definitely need to work on your proportions and composition in general. The wine glass overpowers EVERYTHING, including your type. Besides the fact that your wine glass looks more like a wine bowl with a stem on it (wine glasses are usually deeper and tend to taper in towards the top opening). The positioning of your type is also awkward as %22Retaurante Bar %26 Delikatessen%22 doesn't appear to line up with anything. Finally, placement of the cheese is just odd.**I hope you take these comments constructively and use them to help improve upon your logo. Good luck.
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