Clovis Crossfire

by jpnunez • Uploaded: Apr. 02 '12

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Description: Logo for Competitive Youth Soccer League
As seen on: Clovis Crossfire Soccer

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SevWork Apr. 02 '12

I really like the essence of this shield. It has a bit of a Juventus flavor. If you don't mind, I have a couple of pieces of feedback:**1) The type for %22Crossfire%22 feels a bit light in relation to the rest of the shield elements which are heavy and bold. Maybe it could use a little breathing room from the stripes too?**2) The ball looks great, but the flames on the bottom of the ball (a connection to the Fresno Fuego?)look a bit more like roots. Maybe reduce from 5 flames to 3 to help simplify?**I hope you don't mind the feedback. Us Clovis guys have to stick together. Great job, sir.

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jpnunez Apr. 10 '12

Hello SevWork,
Thanks for your comments. Anything constructive is always more than welcome.

1) I do see what your saying here. I will definitely change it a bit and see how it looks.
2) The flames would look better if simplified like you said. It does give a Fuego vibe but it was not intentional. They wanted fire somewhere in the logo and that's where it fit best.

This actually ended up as their secondary logo. I did another logo, and thats what they ended up using as a primary. To me this one has more of a soccer club feel.

Thanks for taking time to share your thoughts. Love to hear more from my fellow Clovis-folk.

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