by dbunk • Uploaded: May. 25 '09

Description: Zoom into the right job.

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: blueminimalisticminimalsimplelens

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aeghort said on May. 25 '09

Just some random ideas:
1. I would go further to the core of this concept by simplifying the eyeglass (removing the light lens and maybe even that dark "reflection") and turning it to make the tie point straight down. But, to be honest, I really don't know, whether it's a good idea :).
2. Nice mark/concept. Really nice mark/concept.
3. The colour combination is really subtle. I like it.
4. I don't like the "J". It attracts attention away from the lens. I would try a different font.

dbunk said on May. 25 '09

Thanks aeghort for your views, The tie is at an angel as in the angle while holding the lens. One does not hold it straight rather than at an angle. The rest of it looks fine to me

crislabno said on May. 25 '09

not quite sure about .com placement
other than that it's lovely

dbunk said on May. 26 '09

Perked up, thanks CRIS for sharing your views

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