by JasonCho • Uploaded: Oct. 02 '08
Gallerized Oct. '08 1e6572372a6489a799a8bf887dc44298.png

Description: bird. a basic cover :)

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Not seeking critique

Tags: swanswanswanswan

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echofactory said on Oct. 03 '08

Everybody loves swans.

penflare said on Oct. 04 '08

yeah i love the shape, great job jason cho!

logomotive said on Oct. 05 '08

This is a bit weak IMO.Type is too small,not enough grace in bird,overall lacking a lot.

logomotive said on Oct. 05 '08

What I always try to do is imagine all of the type lumped into a solid mass and compare that to the the mark. I also take into consideration the negative areas of the type and your swan here is solid. It's all about ratio. if you where to reduce this logo for biz card size the type would nearly be gone.

GabrielRO said on Oct. 06 '08

not like much the "face", love the type

maximalist said on Oct. 06 '08

so nice, so beautiful!

ddayco said on Oct. 07 '08

I wouldn't add anything. I think it's the simplicity that makes it work. Any more detail would detract from the elegance of it. Nice job.

waynepashley said on Oct. 09 '08

Like logomotive said, the proportions of the bird make it look dumpy and top-heavy. I also don't see the point in the line on the face/beak which wouldn't be visible when printed small.

jasoncho said on Oct. 09 '08

okay , oh and the little line on the face... I don't know where it came from :(

kokolynee said on Oct. 15 '08

This makes me feel lofty inside- gorgeous.

tintation said on May. 06 '11

Clean Beautiful and Simple

Great Job :)

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