White Dream_v2

by Lo • Uploaded: Nov. 13 '11
Gallerized Nov. '11 cb415d37eee592739f3da6c6d8f57755.png

Description: wedding accessories. calligraphy

Status: Client work

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

More from this user:

Type and Signs said on Nov. 13 '11

B E A U T Y T O O !

samdemastrie said on Nov. 13 '11

It says "White Dream" but there isn't any white to be found!

LadyGrey said on Nov. 13 '11

Lo. cool, how ever)

dotflo said on Nov. 13 '11

very nice, i feel that just one heart is enough (by one i mean the one on the i)

azacarias7 said on Nov. 14 '11

Beautiful Typography!

Artgeko said on Nov. 14 '11

Graphically pleasing logo!

balic said on Nov. 16 '11

Nice calligraphy!
I like the background too, it reminds me on pillow and I start to feel sleepy ;)

About the hearts: I think that @dotflo is right. Theese two big hearts make the one on "i" invisible, plus the one that is upside down looks wierd to me, like it represents sad love.
If you leave just the one on "i" and make it baby pink, whole logo would look cleaner, simplier and the little pink heart will shine in the middle. Just my opinion.

atomicvibe said on Nov. 16 '11

I really love the type, but IMO, the pink hearts are overkill - especially the one that's upside-down.

I think this logo would be much more elegant, classy, and successful if you removed both of the pink hearts from where they currently are, leaving just the one above the I.

Or, perhaps you could try to find a way of replacing the heart over the I with one of the pink hearts.

But I seriously think that the typography here is what makes this logo special.

Lo said on Nov. 16 '11

Thank you all for your feedback! I agree with the opinion that the heart can be removed.

camisa15 said on Nov. 16 '11

i think that the dot above the "i" can be pink or white, doing this you can remove the other two hearts.

Lo said on Nov. 18 '11

removed hearts

dotflo said on Nov. 21 '11

i feel that it looks more clean now, but that texture bg was more appropriate than the gradient :)

Please login/register to make a comment, registration is easy,