schwarzwolf kaffee

by api • Uploaded: Oct. 21 '11

Description: logo idea for a coffee-house. for fun

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: molnarpeterschwarzblackwolf

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jonndoe said on Oct. 21 '11

nice !!!

api said on Oct. 21 '11

thanks folks, i glad you like it :)

olalb said on Oct. 21 '11

good line..

api said on Feb. 04 '12

thank you olalb, I appreciate :)

THEArtistT said on Jun. 24 '12

Looks like a wolf on a motorcycle.

cnasshan said on Jul. 16 '13

I like the use of negative space that gives the wolf the appearance of crossing its paws.

ClimaxDesigns said on Jul. 16 '13

coffee house? what kinda coffee they server there or are all the patrons werewolves :D

atomicvibe said on Jul. 16 '13

I love a good use of negative space, but I have to be honest, this one threw me off. WAY OFF.

The particular way this one is rendered made me think it was a wolf on his knees... umm... humping... someone or some*thing*.

Then it looked maybe like a wolf on a motorcycle.

I really had to study this one hard to determine that the negative space elements were a) the wolf's right front leg/paw crossed over top of the left, and b) the wolf's left hind leg.

I think you might want to try reworking this one just a tad so that the ambiguity is diminished. Generally, I like where it's headed, but I think it may be too confusing for most people.

Either that or I'm just dim (not entirely out of the question).

THEArtistT said on Jul. 16 '13

^ if you hadn't described it, I would never have seen it. it is too clever for its own good. such designs may delight a few, but the don't work for the many which is what good design is supposed to do. I love the illustration, but unless people can SEE it, it is useless. try adding a color for the fore and back legs?

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