by lumo • Uploaded: Mar. 14 '11

Description: Another concept for ibragger.

Status: Work in progress

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: hornrolllegshands

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lumo said on Mar. 14 '11

Love some feedback on this concept. Thanks.

contrast8 said on Mar. 14 '11

it is hard to see.. from first look i saw tent and some kind of trambone..

lumo said on Mar. 14 '11

I'm going for a horn and a shopping bag. Perhaps the bag is too tent like. I'm trying to combine the handles from both items to mesh.

contrast8 said on Mar. 14 '11

understand that, but think need to improve it somehow

lumo said on Mar. 14 '11

I think the 'tent' is what is distracting it right now. I'll see if I can find a solution to it.

Alisa1711 said on Mar. 14 '11

I saw a kettle :-)

deiv said on Mar. 14 '11

interesting, lumo ;) here look at this http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_lpFvUD9O3hQ/TAbZRUY2HDI/AAAAAAAAJOE/UIUFXjyV-es/s800/loewe paper bag.jpg maybe try to do something with right corner of bag? one or two extra lines. just need something not big and i will identify that is is BAG! because now it looks like Deividas said - tent :))) good luck, mate!

lumo said on Mar. 14 '11

Made some updates to this.

myway999 said on Mar. 14 '11

add some little detail to the bag, James. or change the shape a bit, or maybe something like deiv suggested. that might do the trick.

lumo said on Mar. 14 '11

I've lowered the bottom right corner and added the line to give more perspective of the bag.

Sean Heisler said on Mar. 14 '11

I think what might help too, James, is rounding the handle of the horn so that is looks more like the handle of a fancy shopping bag.

1ta said on Aug. 08 '11

very very nice style :o)

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