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Does something along these lines work?

I'd say it's better, but i'm not too keen on the %22t%22... Try focusing on the %22it%22 combination, the T is too heavy for the I... that last word just seem unbalanced... imo.

good point, alex. i think i've been looking at it too long.:)

%3B) You should probably wait 'till some of the experts (dare i say veterans) chips in with their opinion... i'm merely a rookie in this game.

:) Oh i think you've made a good point, the %22i%22 and %22t%22 seem a bit conjested. But i'll wait and see. things may look different in the morning. :) thanks 4 the observation, alex.

Mikey, I like the type. But I'm with Alexander. %22It%22 doesn't fit the story IMO:) You could try removing the left part of the crossbar on letter %22T%22 plus make the finial of the %22T%22 less pointy.*Also maybe try putting the mark on the right side. On the left mark looks a bit too bounded with the type.*I hope my babbling makes sense:-)

Mikey, I think there's something wrong with the compression and image quality. And I agree with the others, the %22t%22 sticks out. Otherwise, very nice.

UPDATED. Thanks Alex, Roko and lecart for the insight. great points. I think this is working much nicer now.

Thanks, Alen. Yeah with the help I got, I think this is close to the finish.

UPDATED%3E Just rounded off the %22g%22, thought it matched the %22n%22 better.