by deiv • Uploaded: Dec. 02 '10
Gallerized Nov. '12 aeba1b1dfd26583b2b292a1decb61203.png

Description: Concept for Diana's music shop.

Status: Unused proposal

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: songsingintrumentssellbuy

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Rokac said on Dec. 02 '10

This is nice. Only thing that bothers me a bit are those lines(around the "shop"). You can try increasing and extending the "shop" word and at the same time reducing the length of the lines. Also maybe some lighter shade of yellow for those line...

balic said on Nov. 05 '12

I agree with Rokac. Other than that, it looks very nice, lovely D-harp monogram!

chanpion said on Nov. 06 '12

Great pointers there from Rokac. Totally agree. The line work on the curve of the D and its thickness could do with a little refinement. Other than that, you have superb design here. Just too bad its not in use.

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