by lumo • Uploaded: Sep. 29 '10

Description: wip...children's clothing. not quite settled on colors yet, but the idea is there.

Status: Work in progress

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: circlesroundfacemask

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nickhood said on Sep. 29 '10

Great work! I like it a lot. Perhaps a little more space between the whiskers or a smaller stroke. maybe have them fan outward a bit. Something about them is bothersome. I think its 99% there.

lumo said on Sep. 30 '10

thanks nickhood. updated.

clairec said on Oct. 03 '10

Awesome mark! Just one thing in the type, the y seems too close to the n in comparison with the other letters. Great feel overall & well suited to the subject

raja said on Oct. 03 '10

This is well drawn, I love the horizontal break. In terms of colour, have you tried contrasting the eye area with the rest?...raccoons are best known for their black eyes.

I think you can get more playful and attentive with the type

raja said on Oct. 03 '10

I see that you have updated this -- looks more coony now :D A great refinement.

lumo said on Oct. 04 '10

Thanks clairec and raja for the comments. Updated with mask and customized the type.

Are the colours suitable for the job here?

raja said on Oct. 04 '10

I'd go with bigger type -- what age group of kids is this targeting?

lumo said on Oct. 04 '10

Currently the type is aligned with the 'mask' as you can see. Thinking of age 3-8 ish. around there.

thomas said on Oct. 05 '10

As usual, nice logo James. Catchy and clean, I like it.

lumo said on Oct. 06 '10

thanks thomas.

nickhood said on Oct. 07 '10


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lumo said on Oct. 17 '10

thanks nickhood and logoses

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