by mabu • Uploaded: Sep. 05 '10
Gallerized Sep. '10 9b1c48363f8360f94f79fb0485f7690f.png

Description: Facchinelo is a small family-owned business handed down through 3 generations. They produce finger lickin' good olives and olive oils.

As seen on: mabu.dk

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: mads burcharthmabutexturebespokehandwriting

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mabu said on Sep. 05 '10

2nd take on the Facchinelo logotype. I'd love to hear some thoughts.

Art Machine said on Sep. 05 '10

Very nice. I prefer this one, mainly for legibility reasons. I feel this baby needs a little more randomness in the baseline or a swash into the descender line somewhere, maybe on the "n" or the "l".

vernics said on Sep. 05 '10

Agree with Julian. Overall very appealing.

milou said on Sep. 05 '10

To be honest I like this the way it is. I'm loving your typography works.

andreiu said on Sep. 05 '10

I like it, still it seems to me the text isn't on a perfect line, it's somehow bended upwards. Do you know what I mean? I think the "i" is the problem, seems to be a bit smaller.

milou said on Sep. 05 '10

^ Agreed, the i and n in down part seems little odd regarding to the rest.

davishama said on Sep. 05 '10

I agree with everyone here. I'm sure you will take a look and solve this. Great logo and showcase, Mads.

hyperborea said on Sep. 05 '10

congrats on the gallery spot. well deserved.
and great showcase man! just keep up the good work.

bitencourt said on Sep. 05 '10

good one, Mabu!

crislabno said on Sep. 05 '10

need some work on lines. but it;s lovely either way

myway999 said on Sep. 05 '10

great work, Mabu! andreiu may have a point here, but it looks great anyway:p

Mikeymike said on Sep. 06 '10

terrific type work. great stuff here and in your showcase.

mabu said on Sep. 06 '10

Thanks a bunch for the kind words and feedback everyone. I've revised the issues on the /i/ and /n/.

epicantus said on Sep. 07 '10

Lovely type work!

michaelspitz said on Sep. 10 '10

Great type Mads!

mabu said on Sep. 10 '10

Cheers Michael and epicantus.

jippy rinaldi said on Sep. 11 '10

staring at it for almost two glass of coke and i cant find the downside. Simply beautiful, mabu..

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