banana's rock

by davemondra • Uploaded: Aug. 04 '08


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Description: banana's rock is a bar with live music
Status: Client work
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GabrielRO Aug. 04 '08

i love coca-cola too.

sdijock Aug. 04 '08

The type is kind of cool - maybe a little to over-the-top/80's metal band looking. But the combined shape of the guitar and type outline is just odd.

sdijock Aug. 06 '08

Hey dave - thanks for the compliment you left about my PPP logo - I really appreciate it.**As for suggestions to the BananasRock logo, I think you could start by simplifying the type a little. Overall, I like the type and I love the %22B%22, so I wouldn't change that at all, but I think if you simplified some of the other letters it would work better. For instance, I would make the %22s%22 the same height at the rest of the lower-case letters (in other words, don't extend the %22s%22 down). And I would also modify the %22R%22 by straightening out the descender (ie, the lower curved extension). I would also take the little loop off the upper right section of the %22o%22. Finally, take a look at your kerning overall - you need to even out the spacing between your letters. The spacing between the %22R%22 and the %22o%22 feels about right, so I would use that as my guide.**In regards the guitar/type outline, I would consider just making the red outline around the type thinner to let the guitar shape come through more.**Please remember, these are just my suggestions so feel free to disagree. I'm sure the rest of the Pond will add to my comments as well, which is a good thing. Overall it's a cool design that just needs a little refinement. I look forward to seeing what you do with it.

neobyte Oct. 28 '08

Hola david, veo que has realizado el logotipo de caf%E9 selecto de la ciudad, de que parte eres, eres de Tabasco?, espero podamos comunicarnos, mis logotipos los puedes encontrar por Neobyte o PC. Saludos

gyui Oct. 28 '08

i don't know if this will work, but can you incorporate a banana as the neck of the guitar?:P%0D*%0D*and in terms of what Sdijock said about your type, a lot of it makes sense. Try them out, if they work great, if they don't, fine too.:)%0D*%0D*I like what you have though!


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