Jul. 07 '11
Salon on manicure and a pedicure.
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cool! & colors & forms)
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Proboval razniy, etot ponravilcya bolshe vceh!
great concept and execution.
Partial view of the thumb would help close the upper left blank space and maybe balance it more. Great concept, just my 2 cents.
I think an article and preposition is unnecessary in the tagline, correct me if i'm wrong. Just "Manicure & pedicure salon"?
I'd rather see this designed in the designer's native language -- russian -- rather than a poor attempt at translating it into english; sorry to say, the translation did not go well. Design-wise, this is unreadable at smaller sizes, so the words written incorrectly will be hard to read anyway. It's unfortunate.
Kill me for my bad English))).
Alex, I really think you are a talented designer of graphics. You have a great style. But, words matter, and words that represent a logo need to represent them as well as, or better than, the graphic itself.
This is not a personal attack on you, so please do not take it as such. I say this from a general point of view: words matter. Think of it like this: logos here on logopond can only get in if they're type only (words only) or type and graphics. A graphic-only logo doesn't get in. Why? Because it's incomplete. That alone illustrates my point: words are more communicative on their own than a graphic is. Which means improper english is not good for the design, and does not effectively communicate a logo's intent.
I understand this is not a logo that was commissioned by a client -- it's on brandstack at http://brandstack.com/logo-design/details/29679 -- so no harm, no foul. But in my personal opinion, if you'd like to sell this design to someone some day, if you happen to know someone personally who speaks fluent english, have them take a look at work you're translating to english before you post it there. You may have better luck selling it in the future.
I once again, mean this in the most kindest, professional manner possible, and my aim is to help you improve. Please do not be offended.
I don't take offense at criticism)) it is quite admissible. This sign isn't sold also I don't try to sell it. For me the idea is important, the writing can be corrected! In all the rest the logo seems to me quite %u0437%u0430%u043A%u043E%u043D%u0447%u0435%u043D%u044B%u043C.
I don't take offense at criticism)) it is quite admissible. This sign isn't sold also I don't try to sell it. For me the idea is important, the writing can be corrected! %u0412%u0440 the rest the logo to me seems to all quite finished.
you could just change it to 'manicures and pedicures'
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Great mark! I do agree with the comments about the translation, but otherwise, I love it. Very creative take on the typical salon motifs.
Love this logo!!! is cute and girly!
clever & neat
Always love this!!
I want to use this logo!!!
Customize it for me!
write on mail. let's talk
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