mallen58,
You have some technical issues with the illustration itself, on top of that I don\'t think that it works. It looks unfinished and unprofessional. Almost like clipart. The type needs lots of work! I would imagine maybe something that is more iconic \"grandma\" like a rocking chair or a crochet set or knitting needles?
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i like it. it feels inviting but i feel like it is missing something not sure what.
Replymallen58,
ReplyYou have some technical issues with the illustration itself, on top of that I don\'t think that it works. It looks unfinished and unprofessional. Almost like clipart. The type needs lots of work! I would imagine maybe something that is more iconic \"grandma\" like a rocking chair or a crochet set or knitting needles?
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