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Variant [v2]

by plantingSeeds • Uploaded: Mar. 31 '10
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Description: Variant could be used for a publishers, writers guild, or a wide variety of pen and nib manufacturers. (The type is a customised mix of Birch and Matrix II OT)

Status: Just for fun

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: fountain-pen • writers • publishers • books • writing

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mcdseven said on Mar. 31 '10

very nice planting seeds. love the mark but not quite convinced of the logotype.
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plantingseeds said on Mar. 31 '10

Thanks Mcd. What's distracting you about the type?
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mcdseven said on Mar. 31 '10

Just dont find this particular face pleasing to the eye, just a personal thing! I find the the different line weights on the v a little alien to the mark, but hey together the logo is very nice and its just boiling down to my own taste, so ignore what i say!!!! Good work!
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eziemac said on Mar. 31 '10

I like it, man. I think the pen should be made more obvious at first glance though
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plantingseeds said on Apr. 01 '10

@MCD, I completely agree about the line weight being stressed on the type but equal on the mark makes the connection between the two less than ideal, *but* I didn't want to force the equal line-weight onto the type and the mark looks odd with stressed lines. I really appreciate your feedback! @Eziemac, Thanks dude, the pen-nib might be less obvious on this mark because there's other white-space within the roundel. (which is why I prefer V1)

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