Clever one, Stefan. Have you tried closing the gap at the bottom right corner of the mark? Also, 'TOURS' seems a little heavy in weight. I would either reduce the size and adjust the tracking or try another typeface. Even so, I love this. Keep up the great work!
chanpion said on
Apr. 23 '07
BA..U..TA..FUL! Clever and attractive. You dream up some good stuff Stef!
I really appreciate the input, guys :))))
Ocularlink, there are probably many things that I can change, like curves and stuff, but I gave it a rest once it got an OK from the client :)
10x a lot chanp :))))) Hope more and more poeple think that ;)
That trebbel clef really sets this one off! Who knew there could be this many great shapes in play when you just turned it on its side - well done dreamerworx!
My only gripe is the horizontal line (too thick) and what kevin said about the work "tours"
I love this one! It's nearly perfect, right down to the colors. I'm good with the weight of tours and the line as well, but you've got to fix the kerning between the R and O, the E and G could use a hair more space and the A and L could use a hair less. I know you said you already got approval, but fix that kerning and it's PERFECT!
prasanna said on
May. 18 '07
i like the way u had used the eliments to depicting art tours, musical tours, etc. but the TYPE could have been some thing diff try some thing else !!
regards
prasanna
fructosevtl said on
Mar. 22 '08
i love it. the color and the font you chose is right on. your works are awesome. please stop by my showcase and critique on my logos. thank you.
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OcularInk said on Apr. 23 '07
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