That might do it, Andrei. The guy has kind of a happy go lucky feeling in his step, if there were little musical notes in front of his head/mouth. If his head was just a touch more tilted back as well, that may help infer that he's singing or whistling. Very clean and intriguing mark though.
The whistling is great, that brings the concept in but they are a bit too small right now. Also, and sorry if I am being annoying, Andrei, but it might help if the notes were "double notes." Subtlety is great but I wouldn't be afraid to beef up the notes and I personally wouldn't put a screen in them, go full density. Sorry, I'll stop now. :)
thanks for your support and suggestions guys! made some changes regarding the musical notes. let's see: is it better now? :)
ethereal said on
Feb. 27 '10
Looks nice, Andrei. The reflection in the glass might be a touch light, can barely see it. Another thought is some may not see it as whistling but rather he's singing, so it might be interesting if you explored a very slight indication of an open mouth maybe? Just a thought, please ignore if you want. I like the overall feel of it a lot. And I'm done now. Promise. Wait...no. Done.
Yeah, getting better an better; agree with ethereal on the reflection, you could do it the same color as the double-note, for consistency and visibility sake. Great job, nonetheless.
That's very cool, I'm liking it. Haven't seen what have you got first, but now it's strong for me. The only thing I would change here is the mouth to make it more forward, and visible (like mouth when whistling). But it's a detail.
hahaha! I made this logo a while ago, and these days I have seen this: "Trololo Song":http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pYU7oG2V7uc .just look how this guy walks, it's like my guy! and the music is damn hilarious! :))
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