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by red • Uploaded: Feb. 09 '10
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Description: Logo concept for my church.

Status: Unused proposal

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: line artfamilychurch

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Chad Sanderson said on Feb. 09 '10

This one is my favorite of the set. I would pull the type away from the icon a bit. And I'm not entirely sold on the positioning of the text. How would it look if you removed the extra family member then positioned the text directly beneath?

libran005 said on Feb. 09 '10

Lovely work...very neat illustration...!!

red said on Feb. 09 '10

Thanks guys.

@Chad - I'm guessing you're referring to the person on the right? I'll mess with it and repost.

logoboom said on Feb. 09 '10

very nice mark but the layout with the text is baffling to me. I can find no rhyme or reason.

red said on Feb. 09 '10

@logoboom - I really respect your crit. Is it the fact that it's all left justified? Or that the name is so long. Or do you see kern/lead issues? This is my favorite design out of the 3 so I want to nail it. Thanks for any suggestions.

Chad Sanderson said on Feb. 09 '10

I'm pretty sure he's saying that there's no reason for the text to be shifted to the left like that. I feel the same way. There's no sense of alignment, or balance. It looks like someone used tab on the icon then started another paragraph.

jcubic said on Dec. 11 '10

I like the cross and that blue fill is not inside the border.

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