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by tass
Cars selling and renting portal.
Number of views: 159
Date Submitted: Feb. 03 '10
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Feb. 03 '10

michaelspitz said:

Ha! Dig it, and I definitely see the mouth now...
But, I don't know what if it's your bat logo, or what? But this instantly read 'Baccardi' to me from the thumb...
> I probably need another drink... ;)

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Feb. 03 '10

tass said:

Hey Michael, a mouth, indeed, and quite a lot more interpretations...
Bacardi? I see only a small resemblance. And i'd have one or 2 right now too. :)
Here is the symbol larger

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Feb. 03 '10

michaelspitz said:

^Again...probably just the Bacardi talking > (that I drank) ;)
You could try enhancing the tread just a bit to push the tire silhouette?

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Feb. 03 '10

tass said:

I have updated it a bit. To make the tire pop out even more?

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Feb. 03 '10

michaelspitz said:

I know I'm just spouting... ;) But if you want my opinion > first of all I'd ditch the gradients > secondly, maybe try black for the tire instead of red (that should help the mouth pop out, and help the read on tire...) :)

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Feb. 03 '10

tass said:

The circle was at first black but it was too different to the mouth and looked weird... I have added the gradients to give the type more action/dynamism. Still thinking about if i should keep them or not. Thank you for your comments. You surely deserve a Bacardi from me. :)

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Feb. 03 '10

tass said:

Updated again.

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Feb. 19 '10

tass said:

And a look at the future website's layout

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Feb. 19 '10

jn said:

The logo and the website looks very nice tass!

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Feb. 19 '10

tass said:

Thank you JN! :)

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Feb. 19 '10

api said:

good job Alex!

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Feb. 19 '10

tass said:

Thanks Peter!

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