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AG Dentistry
by Bitencourt
WIP waiting for feedback :)
Number of views: 1496
Date Submitted: Feb. 03 '10
Added to Gallery: Feb. 03 '10
As seen on: www.behance.net/bitencourt
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Feb. 03 '10

bitencourt said:

WIP - do you see this concept before?

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Feb. 03 '10

brandclay said:

I get a butterfly right off the bat, but no I have never seen it done like this.

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Feb. 03 '10

bitencourt said:

Yeah Sean, Thanks for comment :)

Feb. 03 '10

myco said:

This is great! Have you thought about reversing the direction of the swirls (counter clockwise from the center rather than clockwise)? I think you might be able to get a pretty clear lower-case "a" and an upper-case "G" - reading in that order - out of the mark if you did.

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Feb. 03 '10

bitencourt said:

Thanks for the tough, Myco! i will try something in that way. I'm working with this way to maintain the shape of the tooth and a fairy wing, that if I flip to aG I lose. But i will try in another proposal, thank you! ps. sorry about my english... :'(

Feb. 03 '10

myco said:

Looin back at my last comment, I realize it doens't really make much sense. I thinkyou got the idea though. I was suggesting you switch the two top swirls to make it read aG in that order.

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Feb. 03 '10

luiz_adelino said:

boa bittencourt, i liked

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Feb. 03 '10

Bitencourt said:

I understand your comment Myco! Thanks, i will try it :)

Valeu Luiz, Que bom que você curtiu, cara.

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Feb. 03 '10

felro said:

!xobile

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Feb. 04 '10

bitencourt said:

Well, i don't know what 'xobile' mean, but thanks anyway! hahah :)

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Feb. 05 '10

hamidos said:

nice design but by the way what language is this

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Mar. 04 '10

michaelspitz said:

The Behance breakdown looks great!

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Mar. 05 '10

Bitencourt said:

Thanks Michael!

:D http://www.behance.net/Gallery/AG-Dentistry/442843

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