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Unused Proposal I am actively looking for critiques
- card+theft
- by helvetic brands
- Work in progress. Constructive feedback welcome.
- Number of views: 210
- Date Submitted: Feb. 02 '10
- As seen on: http://www.helveticbrands.ch
Feb. 02 '10
absoludicrous said:CC sitting on the floor, saw coming through, cutting a hole out beneath the CC. I get it.
Feb. 02 '10
epsilon said:I would lay the card flat on the surface and fix the direction the saw is pointing at. Right now I am seeing an ID/security card on a string with a clip on the other end.
Feb. 02 '10
kathariney said:totally missed the concept.... maybe instead of having the cut line start right behind the card, have it start the the 2 o'clock position? so it looks like it's almost completing sawing the hole, and the cut line won't looke like a string attached to the card... also maybe the cut line can be finer and the saw seems like can be wider on the bottom, so it doesn't look like a key?
Feb. 02 '10
firebrand said:makes perfect sense to me too. If anything, the angle of the saw blade doesn't quite match the cut?
Feb. 03 '10
fogra said:I would agree with showing the card laid flat with perspective for both card and saw.
Feb. 03 '10
helvetic brands said:Thanks to everyone for the great feedback. Unfortunately this direction will no longer be continued as the client and myself feel it may have too much of a negative connotation.
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Feb. 02 '10
kathariney said:the saw like object doesn't seems to work for me... it looks like "the credit card got a saw to rob other people". Maybe some description about the project and what you're trying to achieve?