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by mcdseven • Uploaded: Jan. 31 '10
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Description: WIP.

Status: Unused proposal

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

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logomotive said on Jan. 31 '10

maybe ditch the door,go green on negative space (M)?? Liken it.

logomotive said on Jan. 31 '10

actually if you connect the M (below eves), it would create a better M and H. and make it green or whatever second color. I just had an MH logo so this hits home ;).

mcdseven said on Jan. 31 '10

tried it dude, did'nt work on this but I might drop the eaves altogether and and kinda just go with a rounded cornered house icon, strip it back a bit, still its a bit crap looking as is methinks but there's something there to work with. cheers for the float and feedback! upload yours when you have a WIP.

michaelspitz said on Jan. 31 '10

Very cool! Nice direction! :)
(You could try dissconecting the 2 top middle 'H' lines from the roof a bit...that might give you a clearer M & H..?)

michaelspitz said on Jan. 31 '10

^Or maybe fill in the tringle with solid black...? ;)

michaelspitz said on Jan. 31 '10

Very cool! Nice direction! :) I was thinking you could try disconnecting the top of the 'H' from the roof slightly, in order to give you a clearer M & H...or maybe you could simply fill in the tringle with solid black > effectively squaring off the M...? ;)

michaelspitz said on Jan. 31 '10

^^^HA, SORRY! My browser kind of choked their... (It's all pretty much the same comment...) ;)

mcdseven said on Jan. 31 '10

Hi Mike and Michael (2 Mikes), get you now Mike on the eaves! Think this is a little improvement, thanks guys for the help!

mcdseven said on Jan. 31 '10

meant to say aswell thats a crude rough i have uploaded will clean it up tomorrow.

LOGOMOTIVE said on Jan. 31 '10

^;)

mcdseven said on Jan. 31 '10

door handle gone. thks folks.

michaelspitz said on Jan. 31 '10

Looks good ;)

michaelspitz said on Jan. 31 '10

^BTW : This really pops on the green! ;)

JoePrince said on Jan. 31 '10

I like it. Nice work.

andreiu said on Jan. 31 '10

much better! nice job.

ethereal said on Jan. 31 '10

Liking it Paul, nice one.

mcdseven said on Feb. 01 '10

Hey folks, thanks for all the comments / feedback / floats very much appreciated. At thisguy, yeah course you can move in!

brandcolour said on Feb. 01 '10

yes, nice!

michaelspitz said on Feb. 01 '10

Solid stuff! Again, loving the green :)

mcdseven said on Feb. 01 '10

Howdy, made some minor alterations, tidied up the negative space so that it is equal to the House and H structure. Closed of the bottom of the house.

michaelspitz said on Feb. 01 '10

Very nicely balanced! > & I like it even more closed up! :)

logomotive said on Feb. 01 '10

Paul, that is exactly how I invisioned it. Good work.

!mude said on Feb. 01 '10

Looks really nice

mcdseven said on Feb. 02 '10

@brnadcolour, Michael, mude, cheers folks! @Mike, cheers dude, would have liked to spend a little more time the other night but my 10 week old daughter was demanding her night time feed Anyway thanks for the help and feedback, am enjoying designing logos these days, its been a long time since I have felt like that.

cresk said on Feb. 02 '10

Great mark, i think its effective enough.

Type08 said on Feb. 02 '10

Making this logo in dark green on this green background would be a super (green) nice visually! :)

mattaebersold said on Feb. 02 '10

Cool

pajul said on Feb. 06 '10

Very nice, but very similar to the Magento logo: http://www.magentocommerce.com Not a big deal, though. Similarities are inevitable in logo design. Tiny canvases and all that. Nice mark.

Elvis26 said on Feb. 23 '10

haha%uFF0Clike a face,not happy,but I like it!!

hanuman shakti said on Apr. 21 '10

I do like this dude

Gal said on May. 07 '10

Good house.)

raifsmbr said on May. 07 '10

Smart design!

oski said on Aug. 03 '10

Perfecto!!

jippy rinaldi said on Aug. 15 '10

Great logo design! Very nice job :)

mcdseven said on Aug. 15 '10

cheers jippy!

mabu said on Sep. 01 '10

Love this concept man.

brandsirrah said on Sep. 01 '10

Great concept but I don't think mabu's is too close to this. I think they can coexist together.

fosterbarker said on Oct. 26 '10

Dig it

mcdseven said on Oct. 26 '10

@brandsirrah... a bit confused by what your saying. @ Foster... thanks dude, much appreciated.

logoboom said on Oct. 26 '10

Very nice refinement.

mcdseven said on Oct. 26 '10

@brandsirah... again, I get you now. apologies!

atomicvibe said on Nov. 11 '10

Love it! Lookin' good :)

mcdseven said on Nov. 12 '10

^thank you atomivibe

MilCaras said on Nov. 25 '10

Lke it for construction;)

mcdseven said on Nov. 26 '10

^cheers

lumavine said on Jan. 21 '11

Reminds me somehow of the Tiger Woods logo. Not so similar that it is a problem, but perhaps the association is worth considering. Looks great anyway!

robin21 said on Oct. 11 '11

Strong mark!

mcdseven said on Oct. 11 '11

thanks robin.

Type and Signs said on Oct. 11 '11

sharp !

Mikeymike said on Oct. 11 '11

How the hell did I miss floating this one. Sorry, Paul. Strong and solid.

mcdseven said on Oct. 12 '11

no worries at all mike! thanks for looking.

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