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For Fun Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them
- The Writer's Window
- by tabithakristen
- Thanks for looking :)
- Number of views: 429
- Date Submitted: Jan. 25 '10
Jan. 25 '10
janzabransky said:Oh, and one more thing, I like this BW version most of all 3! I think that like a book is written in Black text on White paper this logo should be done the same way ;-) to have right authentic feel.
Jan. 26 '10
mcdseven said:This is indeed a very nice concept. I could be wrong or my eyes are playing tricks on me, but is it of center?
Jan. 26 '10
dotflo said:very good concept :)
Jan. 26 '10
tabithakristen said:Thanks everyone :D
@mcdseven I think you're right :) Is it better now?
Jan. 26 '10
ethereal said:Great concept, love the new execution too.
Jan. 26 '10
JF said:Another great job. Nice work, Tabitha.
Jan. 26 '10
Rokac said:Yep, quite nice work here:)
Jan. 26 '10
jetpacksandrollerskates said:very nice. That it such a clean/tight logo. You gotta do something with that!
Check out my new submission
Jan. 26 '10
ru_ferret said:<3 wonderful
Jan. 26 '10
logomotive said:Clever Tabitha. not sure ya even need the notch in bottom part. I can see this logo being well used.
Jan. 26 '10
JF said:Prsonally, I like having the notches there -- it makes me 'see' the pen nub, no offense logomotive. If it wasn't there, some people might think the nub is just a cord, for a windowshade under the curtains. I like it as-is.
Jan. 26 '10
Muamer said:Nice work, Tabitha.
Jan. 26 '10
pjmaster said:Great job Tabitha.
Jan. 26 '10
Mikeymike said:very clever. nice job!
Jan. 26 '10
felro said:hah nice job, this is a good one.
-felro
Jan. 26 '10
logomotive said:@jf, to each their own but I like the aha factor an we see it as a nib OR curtain pulled back regardless. My thought was that curtains don't naturally have a "notch" and neither does a pen, well at least the ones I use. Nice regardless.
Jan. 26 '10
logomotive said:not trying to discredit anything here tabitha only offering my opinion. Just one little distraction IMO that does not need to be there. The nib is smaller than the base,therefore the flare is not needed? hope that makes some sense.
Jan. 28 '10
tabithakristen said:Thanks again everyone!
Mike, I understand completely. I tried it without the notch and it didn't seem right to me.
Mar. 19 '10
logoboom said:This is beautiful and well executed. Have to admit my first reaction, before reading the comments, was that the notches weren't needed. The pun is more subtle without them. But a beauty none the less.
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Jan. 25 '10
janzabransky said:Very beautyfull mark. I see poetry and stories behind window in this logo design!