I agree with Fabian, tagline grabs my attention, too. I think it works well with logo ... Alen, just idea ... what if pieces of vitrage make C and V letters somehow without violating randomness of vitrage shapes inside? ... Just imagine symbol rotated about 70 degrees clockwise ... I can see V clearly .. without change of shapes ...
Thanks Jan, I think it would destroy the 'wonderful mess' of urban plans and this way mark supports the idea of the tag line (how well do you know it - street grid line, street names, positioning etc - total chaos)...
This is really beautiful work, Type08. The tag line, tho....not so great -- scalability issue I believe. Won't scale down well. Either the tag line needs to be edited down %5Bless words%5D, or the type used should be a narrow one and bigger. Even at this size, the tag line is hard to read.
Thanks, but don't you worry, everything is under control - it's logical that logo won't be shown in the package with the tag line below certain size - I just threw it in here to make the whole branding concept even more clear and understandable...
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Bad luck for long taglines lately :-)
ReplyYeah, you're right, I'll post one without the tag...
ReplyI actually like it better with the tagline...it has a nice authoritative stance.
ReplyThanks brother!
ReplyI agree with Fabian, tagline grabs my attention, too. I think it works well with logo ... Alen, just idea ... what if pieces of vitrage make C and V letters somehow without violating randomness of vitrage shapes inside? ... Just imagine symbol rotated about 70 degrees clockwise ... I can see V clearly .. without change of shapes ...
ReplyThanks Jan, I think it would destroy the 'wonderful mess' of urban plans and this way mark supports the idea of the tag line (how well do you know it - street grid line, street names, positioning etc - total chaos)...
ReplyOh understand now, its perfectly targeted now when I know its street, roads, blocks ...! Great job, I love it.
ReplyGreat work again, Alen!
ReplyJan and Sean, thank you fellaz! I appreciate it!
ReplyThis is really beautiful work, Type08. The tag line, tho....not so great -- scalability issue I believe. Won't scale down well. Either the tag line needs to be edited down %5Bless words%5D, or the type used should be a narrow one and bigger. Even at this size, the tag line is hard to read.
ReplyThanks, but don't you worry, everything is under control - it's logical that logo won't be shown in the package with the tag line below certain size - I just threw it in here to make the whole branding concept even more clear and understandable...
ReplyAlrighty! Sounds good.
ReplyI like em both. Good work Type08
ReplyThanks Mike! Really glad that you do!
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