Lifelong by jerron

Lifelong

by jerron • Uploaded: Jan. 19 '10

Gallerized Mar. '10

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Status: Client work

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JF said on Jan. 19 '10

Love the movement in this.

nitish.b said on Jan. 19 '10

flows nicely...

JoePrince said on Jan. 19 '10

This is very pretty Jerron. Flows nicely.

ethereal said on Jan. 19 '10

Nice.

alto said on Jan. 20 '10

Love the feeling of this one. The type is very harsh next to the mark. I think this is because of the first set of letters "LIFEL" which do not have any curves. Perhaps customizing the bottom left corner of the first "L" and maybe either the top or bottom left corner of the "E" would suit it better? I noticed the customization of the "G", but my eye just seems to be drawn away from the beautiful mark and goes to the first 5 letters.

muse7 said on Mar. 16 '10

A nice contrast between type and mark. I think the pairing makes the mark's flowing quality pop more because it grounds it. Like Alto, I'd like to see the addition of a customized stroke at the same x-height as the G perhaps as the center arm of the E. But, that's just icing - this logo has a wonderful feeling.