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Yellin Melon V1
by lboi
Proposed concept for a marketing consulting agency in Chicago.
Number of views: 160
Date Submitted: Jan. 17 '10
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Jan. 18 '10

JF said:

Well....looks like a good idea, but execution might need to be a bit more polished. Looks like a Pac Man mated with a bengal tiger and then that child mated with the plant from Little Shop of Horrors....looks aggressive and that it might snap someone's hand off. Or, that it just ate something and is chomping the rest of it down, or is burping it back up [the ' marks do that for me].

Doesn't look all that melon-ish, either in color or form. perhaps take a look at a canteloupe [<--- spelling?], the outside and the inside. When you cut one, the insides look like an open mouth, somewhat [with seeds that hang off it looking like teeth, or that thing that hangs down in the back of the throat]. How about using some elements from that?

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Jan. 18 '10

lboi said:

Thanks for your comment. Based on what you say, it looks like I might've succeeded in meeting the clients needs. The client is a fan of Pokemon and wanted that whimsy/Pokemonish element, wanted the melon to look aggressive and have an attitude and didn't want it to look melonish especially not green or red.

Having said that I really like your canteloupe idea, might play around with that. Thanks again!

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