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Undersea Productions: by Siah-Design; Proposal for an underwater production company. Client was hoping to integrate a whale into the name. Readable enough? Updated 3x; Number of views: 2559; Date Submitted: Dec. 21 '09; Added to Gallery: Dec. 22 '09

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Dec. 21 '09

logomotive said:

nice Siah.I even think you could get away with a white r like highlighting the backside.

Dec. 21 '09

siah-design said:

Thanks, Mike. Good idea if the whale still comes through strong enough. I just updated logo to have the left side of the whale white... I think it adds depth. Think it still come through strong enough?

Dec. 21 '09

logomotive said:

Yeah reads better, what about white(under) / blue(sea)? BTW I read it at first so it works IMO either way.

Dec. 21 '09

siah-design said:

The logo vet has all the good ideas... :) Yea, I like the "under" white and the "sea" blue. Makes more sense that way and overall makes it easier on the eyes.

Dec. 21 '09

logomotive said:

OH yeah this is it.:)

Dec. 21 '09

JoePrince said:

Looks good Siah. Nice colors.

Dec. 21 '09

rudy hurtado said:

Love it Josiah.

Dec. 21 '09

Type08 said:

If you move the dot to the right a bit you'll complete the balance with the type getting the dot of the 'i' letter on the spot... Nice concept buddy!

Dec. 21 '09

epsilon said:

This is really well executed.

Dec. 22 '09

teeps said:

great stuff mate!

Dec. 22 '09

pjmaster said:

Awesome execution Siah :)

Dec. 22 '09

siah-design said:

Thanks gentlemen. Hoping the client likes it, too.

@Alen: Thx for the suggestion bud. I had tried that earlier but I found I can't afford to move the "eye" that much to the right or it really makes the whale look funny.