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ShaveYourTongue
by muSCle
This is a working progress. The logo is for a new design blog, which comes under the same name. The concept behind the name and blog, is that the a blog becomes a place to vent opinions or ideas that are perhaps controversial within a commercial enviroment. Therefore shave your tongue could be another pun for wash your mouth out?
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Dated Submitted: Mar. 20 '07

Mar. 20 '07

OcularInk said:

I like it. The edges on the fold might be a little too pointy at the ends. Try rounding them out with the circle just a tad so the fold flows better. Ah, I just noticed the razor blade. Nice subtle touch. I like your grunge/texture style. It works very well for this type of logo. Nice job.

Mar. 20 '07

muSCle said:

Thanks Ocular... I agree with the fold looking too pointy, def needs work!

I like the fact that you consider the subltleness of the blade a good thing.

Others that have seen it feel the blade could stand out more?

Thanks again

Mar. 20 '07

OcularInk said:

I don't think the blade needs to stand out anymore. Might make it too busy. I like it being subtle.

Mar. 20 '07

nido said:

excellent. i agree with kevin about the fold but its kind of minor, the whole thing is subtle yet... loud???
anyway i think its brilliant

Mar. 21 '07

click71 said:

Nice graphic.

Seems more of a background rather than a logo? If the name is "Shave Your Tongue", you lose half the "tongue "word. Great choice of graphic though with the blade and the tongue - great name as well.

Mar. 21 '07

dr_dimento said:

I agree. Very nice. The only issues I have is that if at any time you plan to sell merch, this logo might be difficult, if not very expensive to reproduce.

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