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Client work I am actively looking for critiques
- RAWIK LTD.
- by AlexWende
- Japanese import & export company. They also help japanese companys with their business overseas & vice versa.
- Number of views: 402
- Date Submitted: Nov. 24 '09
Nov. 25 '09
dannygdammit said:This is cool.. I don't have much of a prob with the kerning.. I think every letter and its negative space feels pretty balanced to me.. but it's subjective. nice job..
Nov. 25 '09
OcularInk said:The kerning looks fine to me too. Great solution. The arrows symbolize importing and exporting, while the center dot and the colors reflect Japan well. Great job solving the problem. :-) I also like your attention to detail. The right edge of the red arrow and the center edge of the R seem to match intentionally.
Nov. 26 '09
AlexWende said:thx everyone for the kind words.
@ alen: Thx for your input! This two parts you pointed out were hard to kern, I wanted the spaces a bit tighter than wider.
@ kevin: I'm glad that the concept works! :)
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Nov. 25 '09
Type08 said:Very good Alex, very good! I totally see this logo on those huge containers on ship docks (or train wagons, trucks, vans). The only thing that bothers a bit is connection between R and A, personally, I would put some more space there and match it with the overall kerning... (now when I look at it, W and I space could be fixed a tad as well) :)