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Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them
- PoisonApple
- by jerron
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- Number of views: 4988
- Date Submitted: Nov. 24 '09
- Added to Gallery: Nov. 27 '09
Nov. 27 '09
Gafyn said:Awesome - I love this illustration, nice style, great font choice too.
One small thing is bothering me though (don't know whether it's just me) at a glance, my eyes are drawn to read 'apple' before 'poison'. Don't know whether 'poison' needs to be a lighter to stand out a bit more?
Nov. 27 '09
dannygdammit said:why productions though? unless it's for a client.. I think "the poison apple" or just "poison apple" is cool.. though the productions helps the balance of it..
Nov. 27 '09
Gafyn said:Have you updated? The text colour is much better now.
(I hope you have updated anyway - otherwise my cinema display in work needs a re-calibration!)
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Nov. 24 '09
brandclay said:awesome!