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Bee
by AlexanderSpliid
A swarm of bees forming a "B" The companies real name, is not "Bee" but is quite similar. I will upload with real name when possible.
Number of views: 10412
Date Submitted: Nov. 21 '09
Added to Gallery: Nov. 23 '09

Nov. 21 '09

ideoma said:

originaly nice =)


Nov. 21 '09

alexanderspliid said:

Thank you ideoma :)


Nov. 21 '09

chrisrojo said:

Great work Alex!


Nov. 21 '09

lefty said:

wow, very nice work


Nov. 21 '09

alexanderspliid said:

Thanks alot guys, I appreciate it. If anyone has ideas on how to improve it, i would love to hear :)


Nov. 21 '09

dreikelvin said:

genius!


Nov. 21 '09

dotflo said:

good one alex


Nov. 21 '09

alexanderspliid said:

Thank you flo and dreikelvin, means alot!


Nov. 21 '09

andreiu said:

yea. very good


Nov. 21 '09

brandsimplicity said:

Very cool...I can almost hear them!


Nov. 22 '09

alexanderspliid said:

Thank you. Glad you liked it :)
Not a very pleasent sound, if they are comming for you i guess.


Nov. 22 '09

Houston-we said:

fantastic mark, Alex!


Nov. 22 '09

rincon said:

waooo, good Idea, congrat.. alex , ! gallery for sure


Nov. 22 '09

AlexWende said:

could also bee antz =)


Nov. 22 '09

michaelspitz said:

Nice! :)


Nov. 22 '09

alexanderspliid said:

Thank you, it's overwhelming, commin' from you guys ;)

@ Alex - I would be honored to see it on BS with that title!
@ Rincon, Thats not for me or you to decide, but it would be great :)


Nov. 22 '09

magicshadow said:

great :>


Nov. 22 '09

alexanderspliid said:

Thank you magicshadow.


Nov. 22 '09

alterego said:

good job man ..it works very well


Nov. 22 '09

Chad Sanderson said:

This is H-O-T!


Nov. 22 '09

designabot said:

Awesome with a capital A!


Nov. 23 '09

alexanderspliid said:

Thank you so much guys!


Nov. 23 '09

luiz_adelino said:

ahhaa nicee


Nov. 23 '09

oronoz ® said:

Great!


Nov. 23 '09

monnay79 said:

me likes :)


Nov. 23 '09

ask said:

very nice. all this dots are real bees or just dots?


Nov. 23 '09

alexanderspliid said:

Thanks for the gallery spot David! And thanks for all the floats and kind comments, means alot when commin from such talented designers :)

@ ask. It is dots, which are warped into lookin like simplistic bees.
I didn't wan't "real" bees, which could look clumsy at some sizes, But neither did i want "just" dots, which would look poor when scaled up.


Nov. 23 '09

logomotive said:

Well all B.


Nov. 23 '09

dbunk said:

Sorry to be the one but the execution is close to http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/62856


Nov. 24 '09

alexanderspliid said:

Thank you for the heads-up dbunk... There are similarities and differences for certain. Will evaluate on that. Thank you.


Nov. 24 '09

OcularInk said:

^ I don't see any problem.


Nov. 24 '09

terry bogard said:

Great work! Yep..no prob IMO too. Not sure about printing of this mark though but it is very neat..the bees can almost be heard :)


Nov. 24 '09

cseven said:

^You're safe I reckon. Lovely mark.


Nov. 25 '09

Phane said:

love it. but i really don't like the type here


Nov. 25 '09

firebrand said:

Beeaut.


Nov. 25 '09

alexanderspliid said:

@ ocularink - Thank you. Always good with a second opinion. I am not seeing a huge problem either and i guess some color and the rest of the identity, would make the difference even bigger.

Thank you terry, cseven, phane and firebrand :)


Nov. 25 '09

garavi said:

great!


Nov. 27 '09

D3s7roy3r said:

very good


Nov. 28 '09

elisteli said:

Perfect!


Nov. 28 '09

logotistical said:

o i like this a lot!


Nov. 29 '09

rambal said:

amazing bee


Nov. 29 '09

heinzelman said:

since you asked for feedback, it might look interesting if you added a single yellow bee to the logo somehow. I think that the splash of color would make it more distinctive.

Regardless, you have done a great job on this.


Dec. 04 '09

danistorlie said:

Love this!


Dec. 04 '09

alexanderspliid said:

Thank you garavi, destroyer, elisteli, logotistical, rambal, heinzelman and danistorlie. Appreciate it :)

@ Heinzelman - adding a single yellow bee wouldn't do any good imo. It would barely be visible. The colorscheme really adds something. Will upload in color, with real name asap.


Dec. 04 '09

logomotive said:

I agree but one could bee the Queen bee :)


Dec. 11 '09

2nr6 said:

I absolutely love this, I wouldn't change a thing.


Dec. 19 '09

ethereal said:

Very nice! Solid showcase yourself, appreciate the comment, man!


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