Looks nice. The only tweak I would consider is closing in the gaps from your open stems on your letters just a tad. The p's and h feel just a hair too open. If you squint you can see those three letters stand out more than the others. Also, try a version with the bar on the A there instead of absent and compare the two. Good luck!
Thrasher317 said on Nov. 17 '09
nido said on Jan. 16 '10
Pierro said on Nov. 06 '10
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