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Martini House
by EBrown
..Updated.. 2 glasses and 1 house. Thanks for the comments.
Number of views: 2876
Dated Submitted: Nov. 05 '09
Added to Gallery: Nov. 07 '09
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Nov. 05 '09

alexanderspliid said:

The bottom'part of the martinies looks too clumsy imo.
But else... Very cool.

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Nov. 05 '09

brad todd said:

I agree, the foot of the glasses could be tightened up, otherwise cool design and great use of negative space.

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Nov. 05 '09

Stephen James said:

Maybe try use a rounded door! good neg space

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Nov. 05 '09

alexanderspliid said:

i dissagree with you on that one stephen. I think the "unrounded" door fits the edgy look of the glasses and the typo.

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Nov. 05 '09

EBrown said:

Thanks for the comments. I cleaned it up. Will repost a new one shortly.

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Nov. 05 '09

ClimaxDesigns said:

i think you could get away with making the foot of the glasses triangles that would meld it with the rest of the design well and still will not loose the house effect

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Nov. 05 '09

EBrown said:

Thanks for the feedback. The triangles work much better and I like the rounded door I think.

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Nov. 05 '09

tass said:

Looks like a great result to me! Congrats!

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Nov. 05 '09

magicshadow said:

great logo ;)

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Nov. 06 '09

lefty said:

Great logo, it's much better with rounded door IMO.

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Nov. 06 '09

alexanderspliid said:

yeah, the rounded door looks great, but it was the new "foots" that really took it there!.
Gratz

19956

Nov. 06 '09

Stephen James said:

Love it with the rounded door. good job, loving the negative space and the new bottoms for the martini glass!

25650

Nov. 06 '09

brad todd said:

Wasn't sure about the rounded door at first, but seeing it has convinced me. The foot of the glasses looks much better too, great job on the revision.

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Nov. 06 '09

EBrown said:

Thanks everyone for the great feedback and comments appreciate it.

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Nov. 07 '09

rincon said:

hey Bingo, Congrat for being in the gallery

Nov. 08 '09

etyl said:

excellent

Nov. 08 '09

lisa156 said:

Like idea so much, but will work more on presentation.

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Nov. 08 '09

cnasshan said:

i think the whole negative-space-creating-a-house technique is being overused now... but still clever.

Nov. 08 '09

stevey17 said:

excellent nice work

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Nov. 08 '09

cseven said:

Nicely done.

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Nov. 08 '09

mfrank said:

Gosh..this makes me want a martini. Good one!

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Nov. 08 '09

EBrown said:

Thanks again all for the comments.

Nov. 09 '09

lionxscar said:

Simply beautiful! It's clean, simple and very memorable. Nice job EBrown.

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Nov. 10 '09

clustah said:

Very good work )

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Nov. 11 '09

katenickerson said:

I love this logo, but I wonder why the liquid is not flat when the glasses are.

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Nov. 11 '09

emilb said:

I think its a great idea, and it is well done, I like it!

First I see a house,
then I see two glasses of martini,
and lastly I see a gravestone.

I think you shoud make the door less round, that might take the gravestone away.

Nov. 11 '09

vasvari said:

Fantastic idea! I like it!

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Nov. 12 '09

EBrown said:

Thanks for the comments.

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Nov. 16 '09

MaNurs said:

i love it!

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Nov. 18 '09

clustah said:

Simple style... 2 in 1 ) Very nice )))

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