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Unused Proposal I am actively looking for critiques
- Hunter
- by Stephen James
- Logo done for a friend of mine. He is a web designer, I've created a mouse using his initials. wip, feedback appreciated. Criticism welcome!
- Number of views: 1851
- Dated Submitted: Nov. 04 '09
- Added to Gallery: Nov. 04 '09
Nov. 04 '09
Stephen James said:Thank you logomotive, means alot =)
My thought with the outline was a mousepad.. Think it should be reduced?
Nov. 04 '09
logomotive said:Welcome, at least reduce the outline to the same as the type. nice choice of type BTW.
Nov. 04 '09
Stephen James said:Update, Thanks again.
Much better.
Nov. 04 '09
muse7 said:I agree ditch the outline, it distracts from the very cool mark/mouse and IMO you really don't need it to identify the mouse.
Nov. 04 '09
pjm said:This logo changed my life
Nov. 04 '09
Stephen James said:I'll have to upload one without the outline so you guys can see it.
pjm - I'm glad to have made an impact in your life Lol.
Nov. 04 '09
logomotive said:OK after seeing both now and with reduced outline I'm crazy with Jared. This one.
Nov. 04 '09
Momentummagazine said:I like it I guess. The different weight in the H is throwing me off. Maybe I'm not seeing it correctly.
Nov. 04 '09
Chad Sanderson said:C on outside, H on the inside, I think. I definitely agree with Joe though, you may want to increase the weight of the H so it matches the C. It's easily done.
Nov. 04 '09
Stephen James said:Thank you much for the criticism. I'll try that out I can definitely see where your coming from with the weight issue now that you mention it.
update soon.
Nov. 04 '09
lundeja said:You know what you could do is make the outline on the right side flat and keep the left side rounded. I think that'd really make the CH pop atcha.
Nov. 04 '09
Chad Sanderson said:^ Another good idea.
Nov. 04 '09
Stephen James said:Updated
Thoughts?
Not sure if this takes away from it or not.
Nov. 04 '09
Stephen James said:heh, very good idea lundeja thank you so much =)
Nov. 04 '09
mfrank said:cool. looks like a mouse and now a smiling face with the right side flat. i like it.
Nov. 04 '09
Stephen James said:Thank you frank ! I appreciate it.
Nov. 04 '09
Stephen James said:Oh btw, chad.. the outside wasn't meant to be the C but I guess that does work.. If you block out the negative space and look at the mark as a whole (without the outline) it is a C
Nov. 04 '09
Hayes Image said:Definitley better with the above changes made, good work. The mixture of the thin type & the bulkiness of the mouse is a good contrast, as was the decision to keep it B&W. :)
Nov. 04 '09
Stephen James said:Thank you very much hayes! I do agree, the changes did help this logo out greatly.
Thanks everyone.
Nov. 04 '09
muse7 said:Hot!
Nov. 04 '09
Stephen James said:Thank you!
Nov. 05 '09
Stephen James said:No, it is not ed.. Sorry =)
Nov. 05 '09
Stephen James said:Thank you very much firebrand, I agree.
Nov. 05 '09
ICU said:®
Nov. 05 '09
rincon said:clever, simple ellegance, congrat.
Nov. 06 '09
!mude said:Very nice solution.
Nov. 07 '09
Stephen James said:Thanks
Nov. 10 '09
pixelauthor said:Very nice. I love logos with negative space that DOESN'T pop out like this - more sophisticated because you have to make your mind work a bit to see it. Love to see this refining process on here as well. Great work everyone!
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Nov. 04 '09
logomotive said:Lucky friend. Ditch the outline or reduce some. Big kudos.