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I am actively looking for critiques
- La Vita 4
- by Gafyn
- Re-brand concept for hairdresser. Idea based around bridal hair with a tiara.
- Number of views: 2630
- Dated Submitted: Nov. 02 '09
- Added to Gallery: Nov. 03 '09
Nov. 02 '09
logobunny said:Really stood out in the thumbnails!
Nov. 03 '09
Gafyn said:Thanks for the comments. Much appreciated!
Nov. 03 '09
Logocrave said:very classy- would be good one for jewelry store
Nov. 03 '09
Gafyn said:My first logo in the gallery! Happy with that! Thanks very much, means a lot.
Nov. 03 '09
OcularInk said:I should elaborate and say the spacing between La and Vita and the fact that each letter is a capital makes me think there should be more space between the two words and less space between the other letters in each word. Congrats on the gallery feature.
Nov. 03 '09
absoludicrous said:Congrats. I ha ve to ag ree with Ke vin on this one. La Vita, as you have it titled, is a two word name. Make it appear that way!
Nov. 03 '09
Gafyn said:Thanks for the feedback Kevin, have made some slight adjustments to the kerning.
Nov. 04 '09
square69 said:Classy ! Nice one.
Nov. 04 '09
derek kimball said:Very nice :)
Nov. 05 '09
cobaltcow said:Very nice. I also agree with Kev (he's a smart cookie that one), I initially read it as one word.
Also, I think you could get away without fading the edges out - it loses some sharpness. Maybe work out a way to achieve a similar effect using progressively smaller circles?
Either that or thin out the text slightly, I just feel that they're not weighted equally at the moment.
Awesome work though
Nov. 07 '09
szemin said:o like it :)
Nov. 08 '09
michaelynch said:The transparency is key.
Nov. 18 '09
mivtech said:digital based,,,
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Nov. 02 '09
rincon said:love this, wooo really like it