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Bayview Yacht

by KD • Uploaded: Mar. 13 '07
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Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Not seeking critique, comments fine

Tags: family • travel • hotels • hotel

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logomotive said on Mar. 13 '07

oh yeah, thats the ticket.
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logomotive said on Mar. 13 '07

Hotels and Resorts are a bit small. I would also make more of a break betwteen sails and boat. This will bleed together in print that close.I'm liking this one.

KD said on Mar. 13 '07

thanks Logomotive I have taken ur thoughts into consideration Do you have any other ideas about improving this logo?
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logomotive said on Mar. 13 '07

You also might try giving the "iew" a little more breating room. look at the space between the y and v. Just my thoughts.
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ahab said on Mar. 13 '07

Nice...very clean.
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willyk said on Mar. 14 '07

This is the strongest of all you are showing. I agree about the size of 'hotels and resorts'. A bit more presence there will fill the visual gap between the Y and the V. Not sure I would tighten those as they are all pretty uniform. DEFINITELY I would try some blue in the sails. It needs something... Very nice work!
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OcularInk said on Mar. 14 '07

You might try enlarging 'hotels and resorts' until hotels is to the left of the 'y' descender and the 'and resorts' is to the right. It looks like it might fit well...nice work.

KD said on Mar. 14 '07

Thankyou all for your thoughts and criticism. I agree with many of you and will work on more ideas and post them up but please do not hesitate to say what u really think.

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