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For Fun Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them
- birdie
- by gregidea
- This is a logo for fun...thanks logomotive! It was there the whole time, wasn't it?
- Number of views: 6256
- Date Submitted: Sep. 10 '09
- Added to Gallery: Sep. 12 '09
Sep. 10 '09
dotflo said:clever indeed..congratz
Sep. 11 '09
NIKITO said:very good job, i like it
Sep. 11 '09
JF said:I really, really hate to disagree with nima...but I think the type is perfect the way it currently is.
Sep. 11 '09
sdijock said:Agreed - very clever. Nothing wrong with the font choice - the simplicity of the font helps the mark to stand out more.
My only suggestion would be to make the beak slightly larger as it gets a little lost.
Sep. 11 '09
ethereal said:Nice one! Personally I'd knock out the white lines and then make the type all black/gray and keep it one color.
Sep. 11 '09
OcularInk said:I think the type works fine too. The boldness of the birdie text matches the heaviness of the mark, while the thinner white text matches the white lines on the club. Perhaps the white type can be a little thinner in weight. If anything, I would position the white text a little further from the Birdie text so the spacing between Pro & Shop isn't as noticeable.
Sep. 11 '09
logomotive said:yep there all along :) just make the white lines knocked out and all type 1 color? don't over complicate it. And what Kev said or just Golf since it's for fun.
Sep. 13 '09
lundeja said:Another good idea. Just one small suggestion - when I move the laptop two feet away from me all I see is a golf club with a laceration, so I'd consider making the beak more pronounced. I think you can still make it proportional.
Sep. 13 '09
dannygdammit said:colors seem too neutral and desaturated.. the mark doesnt stand out from the background.. I do think the idea is awesome though.. kudos, and congrats
Sep. 13 '09
TangInaMo said:good mark!
Sep. 13 '09
bimmerix said:loving it!
Sep. 13 '09
tiko1232 said:Love it :)
Sep. 14 '09
birofunk said:brilliantly clever! well done
Sep. 14 '09
ethereal said:Nice revision! Great job!
Sep. 15 '09
brandmantra said:clever concept!
Sep. 16 '09
chriscubos said:clever mark! nice work =)
Sep. 17 '09
milou said:looks nice.
Sep. 18 '09
KonradK said:great concpet ! good work gregidea.
Sep. 22 '09
derek kimball said:I love this. Very clever. Both the golf club and bird are equally recognizable, which is not always easy to do. Great job
Sep. 30 '09
shin said:good eye there :) bravo
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Sep. 10 '09
michaelspitz said:Very clever! :)