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Client work I am actively looking for critiques
- Art Hive
- by Matto
- Art Hive. Pencil point. Need your opinions.
- Number of views: 8758
- Date Submitted: Sep. 03 '09
- Added to Gallery: Sep. 06 '09
Sep. 03 '09
epsilon said:Very nice.
As far as opinions go - perhaps let the stripes on the back of the pencil surface show through ? Make it a wireframe.
Sep. 03 '09
logomotive said:I can see this making an incredible ice cream cone also. Very eye catching.
Sep. 03 '09
!mude said:Yes, much better - nice work.
Sep. 03 '09
s.g. said:Really cool.
Sep. 03 '09
michaelspitz said:Very nice! Dig the concept...dig the mark! (Have you tried it on a lighter ground? Does it work? If you lightened it up a bit maybe you could darken the graphite just a little... Actually it's probably not that color that's throwing me, but rather the type set in that darker shade of grey... Maybe you could lighten the text up instead and see how that plays?)
Sep. 04 '09
dotflo said:nice concept..nice colors..cheers
Sep. 04 '09
doodlecow said:nice concept!! great work
Sep. 04 '09
Porter Design said:I think this is great!
Sep. 05 '09
Rokac said:Beutiful..
Sep. 06 '09
ethereal said:Cool, dude.
Sep. 07 '09
Petro said:Absolutely agree with michaelspitz! Logo mast be more contrasty to the background, especially the graphite and the text.
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Sep. 07 '09
demiphonic said:Those pastel colours are beautiful.
Sep. 08 '09
sanjay patil said:I think it is interesting... rest of things my friends already suggested.
Sep. 08 '09
mekeman said:Nice work, very well solved, My respects.
Sep. 10 '09
alexanderspliid said:grazt, you've got yourself a very nice logo there ^^
Sep. 23 '09
zakaria said:nice puk
Sep. 24 '09
harvey said:yummy i like it!! :)
Nov. 06 '09
andressexino said:buenas
me parece que el logo es bastante apropiado para cierta entidad que se dedique al arte
no es ningun cono ni nada por el estilo yo por mi parte veo un lapiz de colores
salu2 desde colombia
Jan. 06 '10
barryconvex said:Just a heads up:
http://www.designcrowd.com/design.aspx?designid=32419
Jan. 06 '10
mfrank said:^sigh
Jan. 06 '10
absoludicrous said:Jesus. I took it upon myself to send him a nice little email. This shit pisses me off.
Jan. 06 '10
mfrank said:It's probably the worst copy of an awesome logo I've seen so far....haha.
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Sep. 03 '09
!mude said:Looks really cool. I think you need to work a bit on the lighting though - there seems to be light coming from 2 directions - a bit confusing to me?