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- Eriks Violins
- by stereodeluxe
- logo for a violin manufacturer.
- Number of views: 2354
- Dated Submitted: Feb. 20 '07
- Added to Gallery: Mar. 03 '07
Feb. 21 '07
stereodeluxe said:thanks a lot ryan!
Feb. 28 '07
SpiffyJ said:Looks really sophisticated. Why do you have the serifs on the box around the violin pieces? Have you tried it without them? They are a little distracting to me. Otherwise looks great.
Mar. 03 '07
slavingia said:The emptyness of the main violin piece is really bothering me. I also think that the text isn't big enough yet.
Mar. 08 '07
davidairey said:I agree to some extent with slavingia about the balance of the design.
Also, the bridge of the violin will lose detail at a smaller size. Maybe you could simplify it.
Mar. 12 '07
jlc767 said:You're missing an apostrophe. And if you purposely left it out, it detracts from its elegance.
Mar. 12 '07
stereodeluxe said:cant do anything about it. thats her surname: ERIKS.
Mar. 14 '07
evancalkins said:Looks great. It stood out to me amoung the other logos around it. Great work.
Mar. 22 '08
fructosevtl said:I like it a lot. but i notice the white space of the violin is a bit too much. maybe u can create some detail within that white space. i love your works. when you get the chance can you stop by my showcase to critique my logos. thank you. =)
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Feb. 20 '07
ryantoyota said:I like it. Classy, simple, effective.