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I'd like to see the points of the 's' (it's an 's', right?) be smoothed off, so it doesn't look so harsh/thin. Also, perhaps a little more room for the bear%3B he looks cramped. Just thoughts. Nice concept.

Hmm .. I think there is a great potential for neg space design. Also, the bear has an S-shaped crack at the moment, perhaps that'd better be redone since the mark is clearly built around the letter S.

Great job on the bear. I'm not too comfortable with the S, I think taking JF's advice will help.

Thanks JF! I needed someone to say it. The tips have bothered me, but I just wasn't sure.

Thanks, j-CAZ, I'm going in...

Thanks, Epsilon, I'm pretty sure the bear is gonna resent me for this.