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innova
by TernaciousT
innova is a design consultancy business based on forward thinking and innovative solutions.
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Date Submitted: Jul. 26 '09

Jul. 27 '09

TernaciousT said:

Feedback please. The actual idea is pretty simple, the suggestion of candle in the 'i' and the light bulb in the 'o' = innovation, creativity, etc. Perhaps a cliche, what dayall think?


Jul. 27 '09

fogra said:

I like the thinking behind this one, Terry. I would probably have the 'o' in white and taper the bottom of it to represent a light bulb to make it more obvious. Could you also present the logo in a smaller size to make it breathe a bit more?


Jul. 27 '09

TernaciousT said:

Yay Feedback! Cheers Sean. I was planning on playing around with the "o", I just wanted to know that I wasn't flogging a dead horse. Upload a new version soon with plenty of breathing space! ;-)


Jul. 27 '09

dbunk said:

Innovative !


Jul. 27 '09

relate said:

I think the candle [i] needs more of a "^" point at the top of the orange graphic. Right now it just looks like a dot.


Jul. 27 '09

TernaciousT said:

Originally I just wanted it to be the dot suggesting a flame just by the slight angle applied, not necessarily a flame. I'll work up a new version based on all your comments, many thanks!


Jul. 28 '09

dbunk said:

Just havin a coupla horizontal lines below "O" would suggest bulb


Aug. 01 '09

tass said:

I love the way you included the light bulb! :) Very smart!


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