very nice mark. just a few suggestions..**1. drop the outer glow from the bus - keep it nice and sharp*2. drop the curl from the R. At a glance I keep reading tiny REED bus.
Yes I agree with the curl on the %22R%22. At quick glance one could mistakenly read it as %22Reed%22. Also %22books%22 looks really lost in the overall design. Needs tweaking but otherwise- SUPER!
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very nice mark. just a few suggestions..**1. drop the outer glow from the bus - keep it nice and sharp*2. drop the curl from the R. At a glance I keep reading tiny REED bus.
ReplyUber cute!
Reply%5Eagree with everyone cobaltcow said. also %22books%22 seems out of place with all the other playful elements going on.
ReplyAdorable! I agree with cobalt cow's comments as well...
ReplyLove it. Ditto to cobaltcow's points.
Replysweeet!
ReplyYes I agree with the curl on the %22R%22. At quick glance one could mistakenly read it as %22Reed%22. Also %22books%22 looks really lost in the overall design. Needs tweaking but otherwise- SUPER!
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ReplyDefinitely agree. Keep it simple. No outer glow and too many curls.
ReplyI love it. It is perfect!!
ReplyI love this one, keep it as is it looks great.
ReplyEgree with cobaltcow. But it looks very nice %3B-)
ReplyReed here also.
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