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Tiny Red Bus

by gynemeth78 • Uploaded: Jul. 24 '09
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Description: Childrens Publisher

Status: Client work

Commenting: Not seeking critique, comments fine

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cobaltcow said on Jul. 24 '09

very nice mark. just a few suggestions..

1. drop the outer glow from the bus - keep it nice and sharp
2. drop the curl from the R. At a glance I keep reading tiny REED bus.
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Type08 said on Jul. 24 '09

Uber cute!
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gyui said on Jul. 24 '09

^agree with everyone cobaltcow said. also "books" seems out of place with all the other playful elements going on.

myco said on Jul. 24 '09

Adorable! I agree with cobalt cow's comments as well...
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cseven said on Jul. 24 '09

Love it. Ditto to cobaltcow's points.
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andreiu said on Jul. 25 '09

sweeet!
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nexqunyx said on Jul. 25 '09

Yes I agree with the curl on the "R". At quick glance one could mistakenly read it as "Reed". Also "books" looks really lost in the overall design. Needs tweaking but otherwise- SUPER!
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JohnM said on Jul. 25 '09

sweeet

esotericsean said on Jul. 26 '09

Definitely agree. Keep it simple. No outer glow and too many curls.
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lboi said on Jul. 26 '09

I love it. It is perfect!!
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McGuire Design said on Aug. 01 '09

I love this one, keep it as is it looks great.
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Petro said on Sep. 06 '09

Egree with cobaltcow. But it looks very nice ;-)
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Momentummagazine said on Oct. 31 '09

Reed here also.

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