• Client work I am actively looking for critiques
glitterfish
by danny
WIP
Number of views: 436
Date Submitted: Jul. 19 '09
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Jul. 19 '09

Hayes Image said:

I like it, but the tail looks a little odd...maybe nudge a bit those end points to the right so that they're almost at 45 degree angles from the center of the tail.

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Jul. 19 '09

effingvic said:

I agree, I think the tail almost makes a straight line and would be better off more angular. Great concept!

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Jul. 19 '09

epsilon said:

No, no .. don't change the tail, because it will look like a "Jesus fish" after that.

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Jul. 20 '09

gyui said:

I see epsilon's point about the jesus fish, but i think being such a common shape for a fish it could be associated with many things. I agree with bumping some of the stars to the right.

Jul. 20 '09

danny said:

thanks for the feedback guys. appreciate it. will work on the mark and try to take your ideas into consideration :)

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Jul. 21 '09

tiko1232 said:

It's very nice danny. I agree with gyui though about moving some of the stars to the right.

Jul. 21 '09

danny said:

thanks tiko, im going to upload the changes tonight :)

Jul. 24 '09

danny said:

Client did not want to use the idea of a fish in their brand....confused the hell outta me! Anyone got any suggestions lol?

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Jul. 24 '09

j-CAZ said:

No fish? Use the "G". Or, maybe you don't even need a mark.

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