• Unused Proposal Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them
wirewine
by gravitart
an unused proposal
Number of views: 532
Date Submitted: Jul. 12 '09
As seen on: gravitart.com
17385

Jul. 12 '09

mabu said:

Really special, but that's what makes it good.

18135

Jul. 13 '09

szalaypeti said:

Nice, but I think the typo is competing with the sign. I suppose the sign would bear a less fancy font.

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Jul. 13 '09

logotomy said:

really interesting.

20708

Jul. 15 '09

michaelspitz said:

Commented on this before on Brandstack. Again very nice!

Jul. 18 '09

razen said:

very nice. The way u used font and illustration very good.

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Aug. 01 '09

tass said:

they look good, both symbol and type, congratulations!

20084

Aug. 21 '09

gravitart said:

Thanks a lot tass, mabu, razen, michaelspitz, logotomy, nima and szalaypeti.

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Oct. 26 '09

cesafacamah said:

i like the symbol, the type is too much

20084

Nov. 20 '09

gravitart said:

IMO the type fits with the mark :) Thank you cesafacamah.

8029

Nov. 20 '09

Houston-we said:

actually, im with szalaypeti on this one. I think the type is too much... Well, I'm not saying you should make the type a dull and boring and simple, but you could probably find a less distracting alternative.

8029

Nov. 20 '09

Houston-we said:

the idea, however, is really cool!

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Nov. 20 '09

logomotive said:

I'm also feeling the same about the type competing with the mark. Both are nice just not working well together. IMO

Nov. 20 '09

Thrasher317 said:

I agree with logomotive on this one. I do like it but it get's a bit dizzying. Have you tried a version where the i's are lowercase? Just curious if it would read any better.

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