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- Shout
- by lboi
- A logo playing on the word "shout"
- Number of views: 896
- Date Submitted: Jul. 09 '09
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Jul. 10 '09
gyui said:^agree, the thickness of the "O" throws things off. initially looked like a bat. you can have elements come out of the "O", like the tongue maybe. the 3 dash lines seem either not enough or unnecessary.
Jul. 10 '09
lboi said:yeah .. i'll work on this one, i had changed the overall weight of the type, but feels off.
Jul. 10 '09
knightscreative said:Very cool! The earlier version took me a minute to recognize the mouth. This one is very clear. :)
Jul. 10 '09
JohnM said:exactly the kind of font i was thinkin about!!! looks cool sneh! lot of character...
Jul. 10 '09
gyui said:^Yes! mucho mucho mucho better!
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Jul. 10 '09
theartistt said:at first it is not obvious that is an open mouth. I mean I know it is supposed to be because of the name, but there is an instants confusion at first. I think you should ditch the o altogether and just make it a mouth (add lips is all you have to do). I think that would translate better.