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Su Turkish Hair Designs - V1

by vilola • Uploaded: Jan. 28 '07
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Description: Local Turkish hair salon

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

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eniseanas said on Jan. 29 '07

This one and the black one with the waves are the best among the four

vilola said on Jan. 29 '07

Thanks eniseanas. I'm showing all of the options to my client next week, we'll see what they say. I do agree with you on the choices. Any more comments or crits will be great guys...something to improve on in any of the options perhaps, before I take them to my client?
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G Design said on Jan. 29 '07

Out of all four I think this one is the strongest. Although, I didn't initially read the "Su" part in the logo. At first glance it just looked like a very decorative "S". I think maybe it's cuz "Turkish" kind of blocks the openining in the "u", making it hard to see what it really is. Also, the kerning between the "T" and "u" looks a lil off compared to the other letters.

vilola said on Jan. 29 '07

G Design, thanks for the comments. I also thought that "Turkish" blocks the "U"... although, I tried to connect them somehow. I'll see what I can do to make the "U" more legible. I just noticed the kerning between "T" and "U"...great help, thanks :)

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