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EMEU: by forfun; EMEU Outdoor Equipment,Idea Come From indigenous arts of Australian; Number of views: 3657; Date Submitted: Jun. 13 '09; Added to Gallery: Jun. 15 '09

Jun. 14 '09

firebrand said:

Nice aboriginal style but the type doesn't seem to fit.

Jun. 14 '09

gyui said:

^agree with firebrand, also in the neck area i would add a dot or two to help eliminate or reduce the white space.

Jun. 14 '09

dimARTirosov said:

Completely agree with both Roy and George.

Jun. 14 '09

forfun said:

HAVE SOME CHANGES.THANK YOU GUYS^_

Jun. 14 '09

chez-boo said:

Nice logos you made! Very fresh ideas.
(I like the donkey in your portfolio - cute ;))

Jun. 14 '09

logoboom said:

yep...great mark...bad typo

Jun. 14 '09

forfun said:

Thank you,chez-boo.
logoboom ,can you give me a good typo? Feel grateful...

Jun. 15 '09

OcularInk said:

Great mark indeed. The type is off though as the others have mentioned. Perhaps something more hand rendered? Pay close attention to the curves and weight of the mark and create a type solution that matches. Good luck! :-)

Jun. 15 '09

forfun said:

Thanks for your advice!
Some new changes on the type.

Jun. 15 '09

OcularInk said:

You're on the right track now. :-)

Jun. 15 '09

gyui said:

I read it now as CMCU, but yo uare on the right path. I'm still wondering about the white space between his neck and body, 2 dots will help eliminate that.

Jun. 15 '09

forfun said:

Change again.Read it now?
GYUI,you are right!It's need a dot .I can't understand your idea at first,because I'm a bad boy when I study English:-)
Thank you!