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Rankmydentist

by reilly • Uploaded: Jun. 08 '09
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Description: Unused proposal.

Status: Unused proposal

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: rank • teeth • smile • dentist • toothbrush

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Type08 said on Jun. 09 '09

'Rank' and 'Dentist' in blue color and you got yourself a winner! :)
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gyui said on Jun. 09 '09

^agree with Type08, but with the blue bars reminds me of the ATT bars campaign.
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nattiemon said on Jun. 09 '09

agreed with above, wonder how a few more lines might look or even if it looked a little more like a toothbrush (e.g. rounded handle) ... also along the lines of type08 you could also try and make 'my' bolder than the rest... very nice concept

reilly said on Jun. 09 '09

Edited, reuploaded. Thx for feedback guys!
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epsilon said on Jun. 09 '09

I think bars not need be going up uniformly. High-low-high-low-high could work as well, because it will resemble the shape of the bristles on a toothbrush far better. Perhaps style bars as columns of horizontal lines (like those on audio amplifier displays).
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nattiemon said on Jun. 10 '09

agree with epsilon, too uniform on the height changes, a little variation might look nice...i like it better already though :)

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