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For Sale I am actively looking for critiques
- smile
- by grigoriou
- A smile and a wink inside this simple "smile" word mark logo. I haven't yet seen this done before in this way, but if someone has please notify me immediately!
- Number of views: 1294
- Date Submitted: May. 31 '09
- As seen on: incspring
Jun. 01 '09
Houston-we said:Very nice idea, grigoriou, however I think the execution isn't that good, I think it could be much better if you adjust the 'SME' style to ';)' making it also warped/doodly... Good work, nonetheless!
Jun. 01 '09
Houston-we said:Ah I get it then. Well, if you decide not to change anything, I think this would look great on white if you just make 'SME' black/grey (unhappy) and the ';)' red/yellow. This way the I L would try to cheer the unhappy world around them )) If that makes any sense LOL
Jun. 01 '09
OcularInk said:I'm wondering if you can just make the bottom eye straight as opposed to warped? The lowercase 'i' would read much better this way and he would still be winking. ;-) Nice eye-dea.
Jun. 01 '09
nattiemon said:really like it... i think it reads fine, nicely done... i wondered if you had maybe tried, if you hadn't already, the face just a tad larger (i dont mean the weight of the lines but just in overall height) that might make your "il" stand out a little more... just a thought
Jun. 02 '09
logomotive said:passed my bedtime but had to comment and say, NICe concept. I do agree with OC about the i will still work and look better IMO. Clever idea ;-)
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Jun. 01 '09
swapnet said:cute. ;)